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Thursday, January 19, 2012

Meta fiction: About Tim

Once upon a time there lived a faimily.  And one day the father told his son whose name  is Timmy.  He told him about the story of Tim and his adventure which starts like this: 
" Once upon a time there was a little boy whose name was Tim. He liked to eat food and tricked people. He had a brother and a sister. One day he planned a prank. The prank was about putting glue on his sister's and brother's beds. So their pajamas can be glued to the beds. His sister and brother got angry and they told their parents. They kicked Tim outside of the house. Tim started to walk. After 2 days, he met a dragon. The dragon tried to eat Tim, but the dragon's father came to the dragon and hit him really hard. The dragon's name is Jim. Tim and Jim became friends. Jim's father's name is Dragon. Dragon taught them magics. Tim went to England to go to Hogwarts. Tim met some friends on the train. Their names were Harry, Hermione, and Ron. They became best friends. When Tim got new friends he didn't  took care of Jim. Jim tried to get along with Tim's friends but Tim said he was annoying. When Jim heard about this he left to the land where only dragons lived. He told his story to the village members. Then every one got angry about this. Especially Dragon(Jim's father), so he asked the village people to get ready to bombard  Hogwarts  school of Magic. After few days there were only few buildings remained at Hogwarts and about 22 students left. Tim and his best friends survived the bombing.  A teacher at Hogwarts gave his best friends a quest to do. So now only 22 students and teachers were left behind. Next day the head master of  Hogwarts  came after a long vocation at Brazil Amazon. He was very shocked about what had happened. So, he helped cure all the remaining students and teachers. After that he armed all the statues in  Hogwarts  and charged to the land of dragons . Dumbledore killed every dragons. Before he killed Dragon(Jim's father) he asked him why they bombard  Hogwarts. The answer was " Tim said that my son was annoying." When Dumbledore heard this he went back to  Hogwarts and cursed Tim by saying "Abracadabra which killed him instantly. Then Dumbledore when to KMLA to destroy the school were Tim studied but he failed because there were PAs, TAs, and Mr. Garrioch.  Mr. Garrioch killed Dumbledore in order to protect KMLA and the students.  The End "


After the son Timmy heard the story he was really sad for the Dragon's but was happy for  KMLA winning the bettle.   The next day after he heard about this story he started to see thing that no body else saw.  So he asked his dad what was the problem but he just said that he was to tired.  But his grandfather  frightened him by telling Timmy that Tim became a ghost and is in you.  He is controlling you to revenge Dumbledore.  Timmy was really frightened about this but he was also very excited because he could meet the people that were mentioned in the story.  


Fantasy world
One day he saw a sign that was pointing to a place that he never saw before.  After seeing the sign he followed It. When he got to the place he was really amazed with the place because that place wasn't like the really world because he saw weird creatures and plants.  He thought he was dreaming so he pinched himself but it really hurt him badly.  So he walked towards the fantasy world every step he took he felt the soft grass, and he could smell the weird plants. But then he heard a weird sound that was coming from above him. As soon as he looked at the creature he was snatched off the ground and he was in the sky.  After about ten minutes of flying the creature landed him on the ground.  When he got up he saw that he was 

1 comment:

  1. Very cool story. Kind of weird but full of images. I like the way you started it, and the story you put around the chainwriting is kind of "surreal." Good creativity.

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